這封 中求職者首先搬出了自己的碩士導師，因為他是個(gè)知名人士，并且在信里附上他的推薦信。這些都是有效的求職辦法。另他還強調自己會(huì )2種外語(yǔ)且發(fā)表過(guò)論文，這種“自我標榜”在 里是很重要的。

　　director of consulting center
　　shanghai foreign service co., ltd
　　406 maoming mansion, 580 maoming rd(s)
　　luwan district, shanghai 20021

　　dear mr. director,

　　i am currently working on master degree in international commercial law at fu dan university. my supervisor mr. liu mingyu, a well-know professor of law, tells me that sfsc specializes in recommending qualified personnel to muti-national companies and suggests that i contact you for recommendation.

　　during the two years of studies at fu dan university, i have not only acquired a lot of knowledge of international commercial law, but learned two foreign languages as well －english and japanese. moreover, i have published two papers in the university journal on problems that may arise after china's entry to wto. and they have been favorably accepted.

　　i am enclosing a resume, copies of my published papers, and professor liu's letter of recommendation.

　　i sincerely hope you wil introduce me to a famous multi-national company, to which i will dedicate myself.

　　truly yours,

　　fu jialin