雅思寫(xiě)作高分與長(cháng)難句運用2017年
對于大多數考生來(lái)說(shuō),當他們聽(tīng)到要寫(xiě)長(cháng)難句的時(shí)候,內心往往是拒絕并且崩潰的。然而你們并不知道,長(cháng)難句可是寫(xiě)作中以一敵百的加分利器!請看本文帶你領(lǐng)略長(cháng)難句的魔力。下面有YJBYS小編整理的雅思寫(xiě)作高分與長(cháng)難句運用,歡迎閱讀!
其實(shí),對于寫(xiě)作論點(diǎn)方面,中國的學(xué)生普遍缺乏creative thinking,因此在邏輯微有瑕疵的前提下,如何拿到6.5或者7以上的高分呢?這就來(lái)源于你的語(yǔ)法結構 grammer range and accuarcy,如何寫(xiě)好complex structure。也就引出我們今天的主題:
正確用長(cháng)難句給大作文加分
1長(cháng)難句會(huì )加分么?
高分的寫(xiě)作要求我們有語(yǔ)法的豐富度,也就是時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)氣與語(yǔ)態(tài)的結合,除此之外還要有多變的句式結構(復雜句加簡(jiǎn)單句)
其中,復雜句是最能考驗一個(gè)學(xué)生語(yǔ)言功底的句子,正確的架構一個(gè)長(cháng)難句對于考官來(lái)說(shuō),無(wú)疑是一個(gè)高分亮點(diǎn)。
eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.(簡(jiǎn)單句)
eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed tocomplete the duties associated with teaching.(復雜句)
但這并不意味,所有的句子都得由長(cháng)難句來(lái)完成,長(cháng)難句是起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛之筆,偶爾也需要短句來(lái)調節考官的閱讀節奏。(要注意所有論點(diǎn)的提出只能用簡(jiǎn)單句)
因此,可以負責任的說(shuō),長(cháng)難句的存在對于作文分數的提高有著(zhù)至關(guān)重要的作用。
2長(cháng)難句分為哪幾種?
是不是字數多就是長(cháng)難句啊?
我是不是要把主語(yǔ)的頭弄大一點(diǎn)
萬(wàn)一寫(xiě)個(gè)長(cháng)難句還有語(yǔ)法錯誤,還不如不寫(xiě)了
沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯誤,全寫(xiě)小短句我也可以拿高分吧嘿嘿
我敢肯定很多烤鴨都有以上掩耳盜鈴或者天真可愛(ài)的想法。但在這里需要指出的是,長(cháng)難句區別于簡(jiǎn)單句,即要有復雜的句式結構,而不僅僅是字數的限制。
所謂英文的`復雜句,從本質(zhì)上來(lái)說(shuō)不過(guò)就是兩個(gè)(或者兩個(gè)以上)簡(jiǎn)單句和連詞的疊加。
基礎結構為:
(連接詞)+主+謂+賓+(連接詞)+主+謂+(賓)
當然亦可以通過(guò)“嵌套”出更為復雜的復雜句,但一般高分作文的復雜句只含有一個(gè)主句和1~2個(gè)從句及少量短語(yǔ),再輔以簡(jiǎn)單句和并列句。
Take it easy,我們并沒(méi)有變態(tài)到到讓你寫(xiě)出3、4個(gè)從句的長(cháng)難句。
細分一下長(cháng)難句的種類(lèi),可以主要分為以下幾種
1.主句+從句
例如:Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.(用it作為形式賓語(yǔ)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
2.倒裝,強調或者虛擬
例如:(1)Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.(倒裝)
(2)It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.(強調)
(3)If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬)
3.長(cháng)句加短語(yǔ)的結合
例如:Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))
4.用連詞進(jìn)行列舉
例如:Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.
3怎么寫(xiě)出正確的長(cháng)難句
根據第二部分給出的長(cháng)難句種類(lèi),
現在我們來(lái)仔細研究一下句子的主要框架結構。
1.主句+從句
(1) 賓語(yǔ)從句:someone take it in account(認為)
someone take it into granted(認為什么理所當然)
it 作為形式賓語(yǔ)(高分用法)
(2)高端定語(yǔ)從句:及物動(dòng)詞/介詞 +the extent to which+句子
eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.
(3)主語(yǔ)從句:That+句子+makes it+adj+(for sb )to do sth /句子
eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.
(4)非謂語(yǔ)結構:Given +名詞/ Given that+句子
eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.
2.倒裝,強調或者虛擬
(1)倒裝:Only...can.../Not only...but also.../Be it...or(不管是...還是...)
(2)強調:It is...that.../It is...who(正是......導致了......)
(3)虛擬:If...were...,...would...(注意在虛擬語(yǔ)氣中,this和that后都要用were而不是was)
3.長(cháng)句加短語(yǔ)的結合
例如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.
eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.
4.用連詞進(jìn)行擴展
例如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等
eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well asbenifit.
※in terms of(在......方面),for the sake of(為了改善......) ,regardless of(不管......) 其實(shí)也是復雜句的三大絕活。
例如:
(1)This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.
(2)......for the sake of their healty
(3) regardless of price
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